Hi,
I\'m only partway through Love Marriage for now, so I won\'t comment on that part of your review (I\'m enjoying it, anyway), but I have read Evening is The Whole Day, and many of your comments on that book are frustrating for me to read... you seem to be missing the most important parts of that book, such that I\'m not even sure you read it entirely.
I think one of the reasons it\'s being called \"ambitious\" is the structure, which you seem to have missed; the first chapter already shows us the eldest child Uma fleeing for America, the servant Chellam expelled from the house in disgrace, the grandmother dead, and the rest of the family somewhat damaged in different ways (this is the heart of the plot, in the first few pages... why do you say the plot comes late in the book?) then the main story goes *backwards* in time from there -- each scene happens before the last one -- so we can pick out bit by bit what went wrong at each step, in the family and in the country (there are clearly some parallels in what happens in the country and what\'s happening in the family... this is the sort of topic for a thesis, though, not a comment!). The questions are untangled and explained through the novel.
Your other main complaint was that Chellam had no voice in the novel... but I remember a lot of sections that *did* present Chellam\'s thoughts, and some of these were the most moving parts of the novel. One main example I\'m thinking of is near the end of the book, where we see Chellam\'s arrival at the Big House through her (still-hopeful) eyes. We also see her father\'s visits (and Appa\'s failure to stand up for her) through her eyes, and Uncle Ballroom\'s efforts to help, and the deepest vision into her dreams for the future (and her loss of these dreams) in the scene with the fortune-teller (and leading up to that... what she hoped to hear).
She\'s certainly not the only voice represented in the book -- I feel like the child Aasha probably gets the most represented -- but her voice is very important to the novel, and her tragedy is a very central part of the story.
CF
2008-08-15 05:08:45